yey kahani buhat he shaandaar haiy. baqi jinsi kahaniyaan tou hum apna paani nikalnay kay liyay parhatay hain, magar yey kahani dimagh ki taskeen kay liyay likhi gai haiy. likhaari ko meri taraf say buhat buhat shabaash. jaari rakhiyay
mujhay zaati tor par londay baazi ka shoq nahi..magar yey kahani itni achi tarhan likhi gai hay kay parhanay ka maza aa gaya. sex kum hay aur dialouges ziada...aur yehi iss story ki khaasiyat hay. keep it up. umeed hay kay iss ko Paid Section maiy move nahi kiya jaiy ga. yahan he mukamal ho.
mujhay zaati tor par londay baazi ka shoq nahi..magar yey kahani itni achi tarhan likhi gai hay kay parhanay ka maza aa gaya. sex kum hay aur dialouges ziada...aur yehi iss story ki khaasiyat hay. keep it up. umeed hay kay iss ko Paid Section maiy move nahi kiya jaiy ga. yahan he mukamal ho.
mujhay zaati tor par londay baazi ka shoq nahi..magar yey kahani itni achi tarhan likhi gai hay kay parhanay ka maza aa gaya. sex kum hay aur dialouges ziada...aur yehi iss story ki khaasiyat hay. keep it up. umeed hay kay iss ko Paid Section maiy move nahi kiya jaiy ga. yahan he mukamal ho.